Come back (finished now)

As tears run down my face
I scream I have had enough
I want you Back
But you ran out

You run away
i want u to stay
Its torture watching u go
so just come back, back to me
Cause im not who i was back then

stars come up to night
as we both find our way back home
then w sit out alone
living with this grudge on our backs

You run away
i want u to stay
Its torture watching u go
so just come back, back to me
Cause im not who i was back then

Stop dont go please turn around
If u leave me now
you won't get back
your soul is mine
maybe ill go and come back to

You run away
i want u to stay
Its torture watching u go
so just come back, back to me
Cause im not who i was back then

Hey nice, this must be one of the songs you were talking about. Just reading the lyrics sounds great! Go and finish it its really good! All you need to do is make more songs, start a band, make a cd, and you have a first buyer right here!

That's pretty cool, It would be nice with a tune.
maybe you could make a video of you or someone else singing it.
The lyrics are great, It's about someone losing they're girlfriend or something.
yeah... keep it up